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Latest comment: 21 March by Vepinelli in topic a concern
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a concern

hey, so i notice that you’re responsible for the absolutely obscene length of K.S.Miracle’s articles and i want to reach out and say that you might wanna tone it back a little. the language of the article as it currently is is very emotionally charged, has a lot of speculation and subjective opinion, and extremely unnecessarily long. like, i’m super excited to get to know this uma—they’re probably the character not yet in global that i’m most excited for—and the length of the article is too dizzying even for me.

i think your writing might do better on a personal blog or a user subpage, but not on the character page where there is a formatting standard that you are breaking with the excessiveness. i also don’t think you need to remove all of it! and i don’t even think it’s bad writing! a lot of it just isn’t in the right place. some of it can be kept, like the IRL history and some of the trivia points, but overall it’s just too much in my opinion.

take this with a huge grain of salt because i am not an admin of this wiki or even a very active user but i still think it’s worth saying this to you because, at least to me, it’s an issue. not everyone shares my opinion on this, i’m sure, and if anyone else sees this discussion, feel free to chime in. Guster (talk) 22:49, 19 March 2026 (UTC)Reply

Elaborate further on the emotionally charged part and tell me what would improve readability. I'd like to see the speculative parts too so I can correct them. Vepinelli (talk) 02:23, 21 March 2026 (UTC)Reply